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Like Wendy, I waited by the window
Waiting for you, my Peter Pan.
Holding on, to empty memories
Childish games and worries.

Like Peter, you came to the window
Asking for your shadow and your toys
You barely noticed how much I'd missed you
You never really noticed.

Like Wendy, my heart was always open
Open to give you love, my Peter Pan
You never much cared for my affection
You were too young to understand how deep it was.

Like Peter, gay, innocent, and heartless
You fly back into the window of my life.
You sit down on the floor and sob,
I cannot comfort you.

Like Wendy, Gone are the days when my fancy
Let me dream of holding you mornings and evenings in bed.
Making buttery pancakes and spaghetti dinners
For us in out little house on the hill.

Perhaps like Peter, you will live in a little boys world forever.
But I think you will die, lonely and dreaming of brown-eyed children
And a young girl who loved you,
Before she grew up.
©2006-2009 ~stuckpoetry
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Author's Comments

Yes, I am still grieving.

note: I realize and fully agree that a poem should be interpreted in a number of ways, but I just thought I'd mention that you might want to look a little deeper then just the Barrie Play/Book for this poem's meaning. It's a lot deeper for me then just Wendy and Peter Pan.

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:iconpsychodoll:
one can see the deep relation ur giving beneath the poem n i think is great

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Tell me your dreams, i'll make them last forever...
:iconpinkcardplayer:
this um made me cry and i still dont really understand why i did

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Oh my god...O_O umm...OH MY GOD we...thank you! for the food that mom has put in front of us and STOP! uh...umm...The devil! From...doing bad things and...GET OUT OF HERE!...Satin? So that we may live in peace. Amen. LOL!
:iconmudblood15:
ooOOOooo
I REALLY like this poem. I don't know why, but this was very good. Maybe I like it because there is an underlining meaning. Like all movies have some meaning, and I always thought the story of Peter Pan was sad, plus I never really understood it. But I feel like this poem really explains it, or shows it like...
Anyways, I really liked it. Good job! (wow that felt weird to type) Ha ha : D
:iconzaemura:
Woah... amazing! :clap:

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"Live as if everyone is watching!" - Truman

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:iconfrenchy-xx:
wow, this just... sent shivers down my legs. lol. really, really great. :-)
:iconhartshorne:
This was incredibly sad.
I know what it feels like to love someone like that.
3 years later, and I'm still grieving.

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Will do requests for noodles
:iconbroadwaybound24601:
i can totally relate 2 this poem in some ways. it rlly is fantastic

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You may be right, I may be crazy, but it just may be a lunatic your looking for <3
~Billy Joel
:iconjosepha-aurelia:
I'm just working on a presentation for my A level exams about
Peter Pan and Wendy as well as the syndroms of the same name
and this was really inspiring about how to do this.
So although this wasn't your aim, thanks anyway.
:iconplasticxxheart:
I watched Peter Pan (Disney version) with my little brother yesterday, and I haven't seen that movie in some 7 years. I really got thinking as well...It's like watching a movie and catching or getting things you never got before.

I thought the same things you did, "and i seem to be completely fascinated by it. it has such an excellent concept."

So I went searching DeviantArt for Peter Pan deviations, sure this would become my new favorite fandom...and it has, thanks to you.

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